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Enid BLYTON: The Mystery That Never Was (1961)
Review by Michael Edwards
The Mystery That Never Was is one of Enid Blyton's last adventure
stories, and seems to be little known. It is a minor work, I feel, and a
relatively tame affair compared to many of her other adventure stories.
Nicky Fraser is home for the Easter holidays, and he and his best friend
called Ken, who lives next door, plan to teach Nicky's terrier dog Punch some
new tricks, such as fetching people's slippers or shoes for them. Little do
they guess that this will prove unexpectedly useful in the adventure they will
soon find themselves involved in.
Nicky comes down to breakfast on the first day of the holidays and finds
that his mother has received a letter from her brother, Nicky's Uncle Bob. He
has not been well recently and is coming to stay with the family for a little
while so that he can have a rest from his work as a private detective. Noticing
Uncle Bob's tendency to sit moping at times, Nicky tries to think what he can do
to help, to give him something interesting to do. He and Ken come up with a
plan to create a mystery to get Uncle Bob interested in, and figure if they can
create strange happenings, such as leaving mysterious coded messages for him to
find, or signalling at night from the tower of the burned-out house on Skylark
Hill, he might think it's a crime to investigate, and forget his moping. (To be
sure, he would eventually find out it was a hoax, but the boys felt sure he
would take it well, and just laugh at the joke.)
Ken writes a short note in a simple code which tells its recipient to meet
in the cellars of the house on Skylark Hill, says the "stuff" is hidden on
Skylark Hill, and says to watch for the signal from the tower (which Nicky and
Ken plan to provide themselves). While out with Uncle Bob for a walk on Skylark
Hill, they leave the note where he can find it; when he does find it, he decodes
it fairly easily, and is inclined to think it's a hoax of some sort, but says he
will think about it. They enter the ruined house and look around, noticing a
few signs of someone else having been there, such as an old cigarette packet and
used matches; they also go down into the labyrinthine cellars and Punch seems to
get lost down there, but they are forced to go back upstairs when their only
torch gives out. Strangely, Punch seems to find another way out, and comes back
to them from outside the house.
Uncle Bob seems to think the whole "mystery" is nothing more than a
schoolboy joke of some kind, and of course the boys know it is only that: so it
is very surprising when, that night, Penny, Ken's sister, and her friend Winnie
who is staying with her, knock on Ken's door to tell him that there is a light
flashing from the tower on Skylark Hill - and when Ken finds out that Nicky is
home, not up in the tower signalling, he realizes there is a real mystery going
on. The pretend mystery the boys made up to interest Uncle Bob is strangely
turning into a real one, and one detail after another made up by the boys
becomes real, such as that one of the gang is named Harry, that there is stuff
hidden away, and so on.
Ken visits Nicky late at night to find out if he is there or out
signalling, and the two boys, trying to find a window with a view of the tower,
slip into Uncle Bob's room to have a look - but unfortunately they wake him up
in so doing. They tell him about the signalling, and ask him to take a look
himself, but Uncle Bob is tired of the mystery (which he now suspects the boys
of having made up), and irritated at being woken up, and when he looks at the
tower the signalling has stopped, and he thinks the boys are now taking the joke
too far. However, they want to investigate the now-real mystery themselves, but
have to do it without Uncle Bob's help.
So the next day Nicky and Ken head off to the old house, while Penny and
Winnie go to the museum to look at plans of the old house and its cellars which
are kept there. The house had been occupied by an Eastern prince, but some time
back there had been a fire there and everyone had fled, the prince and his
family had gone back to their own country, and the house had been left a
deserted ruin since then. There were rumours of a golden statue with magic
powers somewhere in the house which would grant you wishes if you kiss its feet
The girls make a tracing of the map and head for Skylark Hill, while the
boys are exploring further down in the cellars. The boys come across a sleeping
man, a foreigner, down in the caves in the hill, and another man arrives and the
boys are discovered and captured - but not before Punch bites one of the men on
the foot after he treats the boys roughly, forcing him to take the shoe off to
see to his foot. The boys run, with the men in hot pursuit - but unfortunately
head into a cave with a narrow entrance and no other exit, and the men
immediately roll a huge stone in the passage-way, imprisoning the boys
helplessly. Punch can wriggle out of the cave, past the stone blocking the way,
and goes out and comes back with the man's discarded shoe - but the boys have no
hope of getting past the stone. There seems no escape, and the boys are facing
a long wait underground. However, exploring round their small prison, they make
a surprising discovery in a hole in the back of their cave - but have to wait
before they can do anything about it. It appears that the men are staying in
the caves, looking for treasures left by the prince and his family, which they
want to steal.
The girls are looking for the lower entrance to the caves which their map
suggests can be found on the hillside, when some men suddenly appear and ask
them where they can find a doctor, as one had been bitten by a dog. The men
head off, and by exploring where they saw the men emerge, they are able to find
the lower entrance. Going in, they eventually find the boys still in their
cave, but are unable to move the stone, and have to head back home and get Uncle
Bob to come and rescue the boys. They have a difficult time convincing him the
mystery has become real, but in the end he comes with them to rescue the boys.
The police are brought in at the end, and the shoe Punch stole from them
actually helps to identify one of them as being involved in the whole affair.
This is one of two stories by Enid Blyton based on the theme of a group of
children faking a mystery to fool someone else, which then becomes real. The
other is the "Find-Outers" book The Mystery of the Hidden House, where
the Find-Outers concoct a mystery to fool their simple but amiable friend Ern,
the melodramatic (and completely unsuccessful) poet - and he is truly taken in
by strange noises and coloured lights on a hillside at night. This mystery also
suddenly turns real in a strange way, and boils up into something very exciting,
and in fact I feel it is a superior story to The Mystery That Never Was,
which remains rather tame, low-key, and quite undistinguished. (The characters
in the "Find-Outers" stories are much more distinctive, too - but then the
characters in Blyton's series generally are more distinctive and vivid than in
her singleton novels.)
The whole crime that The Mystery That Never Was is centred around
remains vague and unfocused, and you never really find out exactly what has
being going on. You are left to assume that the men are trying to steal
treasures left behind when the prince abandoned the burnt house, but you are
never really sure. Or were the things stolen while the fire was going on, and
hidden below? Or might the fire even have been started deliberately, so that
the perpetrator could run off with valuables in the ensuing confusion? Or,
given that one of the three men the children encounter looks Eastern and has the
name Hassan, it seems possible he is connected with the prince's household. It
might be quite natural then for him to come back to salvage some of the goods
left behind, and if that were so, it would not even be certain that a crime was
being committed at all, although the story is written as if there was a crime
being done, and the men certainly behave very much like criminals trying to keep
their deeds secret.
So what exactly is going on? You never find out any more than sketchily.
Perhaps at least this vagueness is characteristic of real life, where things are
not often tied up in neat ends, but it is uncharacteristic of Blyton's writing,
and of adventure stories generally - and the unresolved plot details give the
impression more of careless or sketchy writing rather than of genuinely
unresolved matters. So while it is a diverting piece of entertainment to pass a
couple of odd hours, and certainly readable enough, I don't really feel it is
one of Enid Blyton's better pieces of writing.
The characterization is so-so - not exactly poor, but not as distinctive as
that in several of Blyton's series. The book manages to give the impression of
Nicky being a very exuberant boy, and Punch is quite well depicted as a mad
little dog not quite yet out of puppyhood.
This is one of the half-dozen or so books that were later adapted by Enid
Blyton's daughter, Gillian Baverstock, into a single series with common
characters. I haven't seen any of them yet, and don't know what characters they
have; but it might be interesting to compare the characters in that series with
the characters in the original versions of the novels, which are each different
from the others, of course.
I would also be interested to see whether the new version of this novel
makes the obligatory nod to political correctness and changes Hassan into Joe or
Bill or someone, because it is not considered acceptable to portray foreigners
in a negative way (or even to use the word "foreign" itself, which in Blyton has
no undesirable connotation at all, even if she does sometimes then go on to
depict them in a negative way). But considering the premise of valuables being
stolen from a house abandoned by a foreign prince, it would be difficult to see
how political correctness could have its way here without changing the plot in
many other ways, too.
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The Riddle That Never Was.
This is the adaptation for the Riddles series mentioned above: I have not read
it, and cannot guarantee that all the plot details and other comments given
above will apply properly to it, although as far as I can make out, it is much
the same story, with the characters renamed and given new relationships to each
other (for example Nicky becomes Nick and has a sister instead of being an only
child, and so on).
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